The video shown to class as final before the FINAL touch up of the editing

Feedback after viewing of second-to-last draft

Below are the quotes people used to feedback their thoughts and feelings about the music video produced, these were taken on board after and we decided to use these to edit small parts of the video so that it was the final touched up version, this then is followed by the ways in which we are going to change the video because posting as the final piece.

Good Feedback:
- 'Really, really good'.
- 'Liked the car scenes'.
- 'Mise-en-scene good/appropriate to image trying to convey.'
- 'The colours used in the video: red, black and white.'
- 'Like the crime scenes'.
- 'The editing, speeding up the shots'.
- 'The fast pace walking to the camera'.
- 'Night scene with Laura, the lighting is good'.

The things that need to be improved for the FINAL VERSION:
- 'What happens to the boy? Never see him again in any shots after the car park scene with Amy'
- With this we decided that we would add the clip of the boy looking scared in the video when the girl group is coming towards the screen so that it could connote that they are taking control and he appears more so it's less of a mystery.


- 'Too much crime scene at the end' 
- With this we are going to cut down some of the song towards the end so that the scene is shorter as people felt it went on for too long.